Revising for a Public Audience

I plan to revise my paper in a way that reflects my own opinion of Stumbleupon.com being superior to Digg.com. Instead of just using facts to argue my position, I will use opinion based statements that will support my stance on these two sites. Hopefully, I can appeal to a public audience by explaining how Stumbleupon is more useful to people like myself who want information readily available to them.